Swaat........ (Please Read and Help)

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Swaat........ (Please Read and Help)

Post by waqassial » Jun 23, 2009 Views: 2009




Woh Jo Dar-Badar, Khaak-basar Huy....
Woh Jo Lut Gaye , Bay-Ghar Huy
Woh Naa Mangain Tumsay Tumhara Ghar
Naa Tumhara Sukh, Naa Tumhara Darr
Woh Tou Chahtay Hen Guzr Basr
Unhi Wadeyon Main Umer Bhr
Yeh Karra Waqt , Yeh Talkheyaan
Yeh Gardishen , Yeh Bijlian
Hai Hamary Rab Ka Yeh Imtehaan
Chalo Qaaflo ko Karo Rawaan
Aaoo Milkay unka Saath Do
Jo Madad Kary Woh Haat Do
Kay Yeh Apni Dharti Kay Loag Hen
Inhen Zindagi ki Soghaat Do
Inhen Phir Wohi Sawat Do..........



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Post by Armaan.khan » Jun 23, 2009

Waqas its realy touching or ham apne sawat k bhaio k boooht madad karahy hain or karte rahangy
i am a member of the social group or hamare group ne booht c imdad or booht kuch bejhwaya hay apne sawat k bhiyo or behno maaao k leya .... jis me medicines khane ki chezain or peny ka pani shamil hay is k elawa or bhe booht sa saman shamil hay
or mere apeel hay ap sab dosto say k ager ap financially support nahe kar sakte to plz plz plz dua karain ALLAH say paratna karain Bagwan say k in insano ko sukh ka sance mily or hasi khushe zinge basar karain apne garo me qun k aj in pay aya hay ya din to kal ham pay bhe asakta hay





DUA me yad rakhain

Armaan Khan Jhagra

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Post by kheyal » Jun 23, 2009

THANKS WAQAS FOR THIS GRT POST N MESSAGE.
AAP NAY EK AHUM TOPIC RAISE KIYA HAI....
WE ALL ARE WORKING ON THE SAME ISSUE...
YEH TO APNAY GHER KI BAAT HAI....
ALLAH UN SUB KI PARESHANYAN DOOR KARAY...

JAZAK-ALLAH KHAIR.

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Post by samir_4one » Jun 23, 2009

GOD BLESS THEM!!!

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Post by ujala » Jun 23, 2009

waqassial..............Dear .....u r ever a best n ideal boy my dear


the post u add is really very touchy

n really touch our hearts

dear INSHALLAH we ll do as we can


Happy 2 c that some rais this point

Hats 2 u 4 that post ..............n struggle as well


MAy ALLAH bless u my dear

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Post by Pearl » Jun 23, 2009

ALLAH hum per reham fermay aur humain is azmaish se nikhalne ki himat ata fermay AMEEN

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Post by khayaal » Jun 23, 2009

Dear Waqas
You've wrtten a very touching nazm
On a topic so sad and tragic
And though some few lines are not in wazan
They matter not, they matter not
Feelings here are more important than flaws
Your composition as a whole is REALLY TOUCHING
And any Islah here wud be some bad pilferation with ur matter & emotions
Your post is more of a feeling than a verse written for appreciation Waqas
I value your high human feelings
And your compassion for mankind
And 'Salute' you
For your noble work !!!

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Post by sunny » Jun 23, 2009

Angellina n brat pitt recently donated 1 million $ fr dis noble cause, to protect these refugees in SWAT, Pakistan! God bless all n prevail humanity n love in d whole world! :)

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Post by waqassial » Jun 24, 2009

Dearest Friends.......
Armaan Khan
Kheyal
Samir4one
Ujala
Pearl
Khayaal
Sunny

I heartly thank you all for your concern and showing your positive and soft attitude towards this......
I am happy to see that a number of Lovely comments are being posted on this poem and on this issue.
These IDPs are our homeland people...... PLZ PLZ PLZ help them out.
Atleast we can give a 10% of our pocket money or salary each month unless untill they got rehablitated to their home towns..... Just 10% my dear friends Just 10%................ Believe me this 10% could make them back to LIFE 100%............,
PLZ PLZ PLZ THINK,
PLZ PLZ PLZ HELP,
PLZ PLZ PLZ SAVE THEM.................
They are our homeland people

No one can give a reward on this except ALLAH, who is "the ever great merciful................!"


Jazaak Allah and Best Regards
Waqassial

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Post by nish khan » Jun 24, 2009

ur rite waqas absltly
we daily waste money on us,on r accessories,wat if we use dat money to help dem rader to spnd it on r useless necessities....v cant even fink wat is happenin wid dem...wat troublez n prbz dey r facin rite now..itz only ALLAH knwz n dose who r suffern dere..
ALLAH HELP DEM N GIVE US CHANCE TO HELP DEM AS WELL

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