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Post by Pearl » May 31, 2009 Views: 945

main sadionka karab chupay
apne dil main tanha lerki
dardo gaam k sahra main
phirti rahon gi
guzarti rahon gi
kab tak mere nazuk jazbe
be-rikhi ki talwaroon se
kate rahain ge
marte rahain ge
tanha bheti soch rahi hon
meri tamna k aagain main
kab kushion kphool khilain ge

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Post by laiq.shahid » May 31, 2009

this is good very good

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Post by Pearl » May 31, 2009

Thanks laiq

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Re: Karab

Post by waqassial » Jun 01, 2009

Excellent words...............

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Post by Pearl » Jun 01, 2009

waqassial wrote:Excellent words...............

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Post by amaya » Jun 01, 2009

good post

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Post by Pearl » Jun 01, 2009

maha wrote:good post
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Post by kheyal » Jun 01, 2009

BEAUTIFUL....

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Post by Pearl » Jun 01, 2009

kheyal wrote:BEAUTIFUL....
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