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KORA KAGHUZ...

Post by kheyal » Mar 10, 2009 Views: 1169

dil ka masoom sa kaghuz hai abhi tuk kora...
ger ejazut ho to mai naam tumhara likh doon


-KHEYAL
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Post by Murad Ali » Mar 10, 2009

Tumhara Naam likhne ki ijazat chinn gayee jab se,
koi bhi Naam likhta hun to Aankhen Bheeg jati hain.
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Post by ujala » Mar 10, 2009

Touchy poetry both Kheyal n Murad ali
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Re: Reply with Shair

Post by kheyal » Mar 12, 2009

Murad Ali wrote:Tumhara Naam likhne ki ijazat chinn gayee jab se,
koi bhi Naam likhta hun to Aankhen Bheeg jati hain.
HMMMM....KHOOB HAI
THANKS MURAD
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Post by kheyal » Mar 12, 2009

ujala wrote:Touchy poetry both Kheyal n Murad ali
THANKS UJALA...
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Post by Asif Javed » Mar 13, 2009

very beautiful
all have participated well
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Post by kheyal » Mar 17, 2009

Asif Javed wrote:very beautiful
all have participated well

THANKS ASIF...
FOR YOUR ENCOURAGING WORDS..
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