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Sunil Gahlot
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hamesha der kar deta hun mai..

Post by Sunil Gahlot » Jun 03, 2015 Views: 871

hamesha der kar deta hun main

zaruri bat kahni ho
koi wada nibhana ho
use awaz deni ho
use wapas bulana ho
hamesha der kar deta hun main

madad karni ho uski
yar ki dharas bandhana ho
bahut derina raston par
kisi se milne jana ho
hamesha der kar deta hun main

badalte mausamon ki sair main
dil ko lagana ho
kisi ko yad rakhna ho
kisi ko bhul jana ho
hamesha der kar deta hun main

kisi ko maut se pahle
kisi gam se bachna ho
haqiqat aur thi kuch
us ko ja k ye batana ho

hamesha der kar deta hun main



Guys..this Nazm is my tribute to Legandry Pakistani Shayar...Munir Niazi in my own voice.

I will be highly greateful if admin can post my youtube video here.Search with my name sunil Gahlot on youtube.

Provide your feedback and suggestions please.

Cheers

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Post by chandoo » Jun 03, 2015

good try man. like it.

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Post by Sunil Gahlot » Jun 03, 2015

hi Chandoo,

Could you please post video here.Thanks in advance

thanks
Sunil

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Munir Niazi - Hamesha Der Kar Deta Hoon

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Munir Niazi - Hamesha Der Kar Deta Hoon


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Post by Sunil Gahlot » Jun 03, 2015

I will be highly greateful if You can post my youtube video here.Search with my name sunil Gahlot on youtube. Thanks

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Hamesha Der Kar Deta Hoon by Sunil Gahlot

Post by chandoo » Jun 03, 2015

Hamesha Der Kar Deta Hoon by Sunil Gahlot


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