Barf 2-A nazm by SG

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Sunil Gahlot
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Barf 2-A nazm by SG

Post by Sunil Gahlot » Sep 22, 2013 Views: 2634

kuch jaise jam sa gaya hai bheetar..
na jane ummeden hain ya sapne....!
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...!!

hai andhere ghan ke
chuup ke baithe hain kone me man ke
ye mujhse kuch sawal karte hain....jiase meri zindgi badhaal karte hain..
jaise apne hone ka malal karte hain...
hairaniyat in sawalo par nahin hai mujhe..hairaniyat in khayalo par nahin hai mujhe...
bechainiyon ko thahrav kaise laun....
in sawalo ka jabab kahan se laun...
jo kuch samjha sake vo kitab kahan se laun...
phir ek din achanak aanko se kajal ban girte hain...
ye bhi aawara hain..mujhe chhod kar ghoomte phirte hain...
koi mera andhere dila do..
mere man ka savera dila do...
koi to aag laga do...
ye manzar zara pighla do...



kuch ummedon ke samundar the...
jo kab thahre mere man ke andar the...
lahren inki badi madmast thin...
karti atkhelian waqt be waqt thin...
par sahar se pahle ho gaya savera...
zindgi ne bana diya koi baandh lutera...
ab ye kabhi bhi rone lagti hain...jaise andhero ko god me sone lagti hain...
sapno ke fare fira do...
koi ye baand gira do...
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...



teri yaad...aur teri yadoo ki tadap...
jaise mujhe saans nahi aati...
har pal tujhe dhoondhta hun...
aur tum kahte ho tumhari yaad nahin aati,,
ab to jeena mushkil hai....tujhe bhulana mushkil hai...
tu aake chhin le saanse mujhse ya maang le zindgi meri..
tujhpe koi ilzaam na aaye..
bas yahi hogi khushi meri...
sanjo ke rakha hai..har lamha tere saath guzara...
dhhere dheere jalna..ab yahi hai jeene ka sahara...
koi vo yaad dila do...
mujhko mujhi se chhuda do...
koi to aag laga do..
ye manzar zara pighla do...


Find video pf my nazm on You tube.type"Barf Sunil Gahlot"
PLease listen and share if you like.Thank you

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Post by Rizwan » Sep 22, 2013

wao friend nice sharing
Love Is Just A Word,
Until Someone Comes Alone,
And Gives It Meaning.


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Post by Sunil Gahlot » Sep 22, 2013

Thanks Rizwan...i wanted to post you tube video as well..but forum didn allow me...help me :)

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Post by dua » Sep 22, 2013

Very nice lines thanks dear

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Post by admin » Sep 22, 2013

Sunil Gahlot wrote:Thanks Rizwan...i wanted to post you tube video as well..but forum didn allow me...help me :)
Please make few more posts and then you will be able to add youtube videos and upload images on forum

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Post by Rizwan » Sep 22, 2013

Sunil Gahlot wrote:Thanks Rizwan...i wanted to post you tube video as well..but forum didn allow me...help me :)
u have to post more than 15 posts than u can post and images and videos :wink:
Love Is Just A Word,
Until Someone Comes Alone,
And Gives It Meaning.


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Post by Sunil Gahlot » Sep 23, 2013

Thanks Dua,Thanks Admin,Thanks Rizwan...:)

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Post by Sunil Gahlot » Sep 23, 2013

I request you all to listen to video recorded in my own voice on You tube.
I will wait for your precious comment guys.Type"Barf Sunil Gahlot"and you will find it...........Thanks a lot in advance.:)

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Post by chandoo » Sep 23, 2013

good stuff... I like ur poetry.


and here is your poetry video.


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Post by Sunil Gahlot » Sep 23, 2013

OMG..Thanks a lot chandoo....I dont have words to thank u enough...:)
U made my day..:)

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