Six Silent Tears

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Six Silent Tears

Post by Solcius » Nov 29, 2008 Views: 2624

Last night before went to bed
Thoughts of you filled my head
Though I have not cried this way in many years
Onto my pillow fell six silent tears

The first was for your smile that I miss
And your tender lips I long to kiss
The second was for your angle face
And thoughts of your loving embrace

The third came as no suprise
As I thought of your beautiful eyes
The fourth came rolling
Instead of my pillow, it should have been you I was holding

The fifth came for one reason alone
I felt my love for you wasn't fully shown
I really love and miss you my dear
And there just fell the sixth silent tear.
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Post by harshad » Nov 29, 2008

Was it 4 ur sister or anyone else?
If its ur sis. then its great buddy........
Keep it up.Ur sis means alot 4 u ha?

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Post by Solcius » Nov 29, 2008

Well thats right but pardon me the title was actually Six not sis so I changed it>>>>

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Post by ashu.pu » Nov 29, 2008

hey thats a really nice 1

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Post by harshad » Nov 29, 2008

Hey Talha u r becoming famous ha...............!
I M getting jelous of u.

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Post by Solcius » Nov 29, 2008

hahahahha hey comeone dont u remember what I said earlier>>>>> Theres always someone out there whos better than me.

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Post by kheyal » Dec 14, 2008

NICE POST DEAR.
KEEP ON SHARING.

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Post by Love or Hate me » Mar 09, 2009

Nice dear

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