Barishon ke mosam men......!

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Barishon ke mosam men......!

Post by sadeyez » Apr 07, 2011 Views: 1954

barishon k mosam men
muhabbaton k alam men

main ne us se pocha tha
chor to na jao gey?
us ne hath thaam kr
pyar se mujhe bola'
kese chor sakta hon?
tum to jan ho meri.

or aj aisa ha.

barishon k mosam men
wehshaton k alam men
main ne us se pocha ha?
chor k jo jana tha
muskurati galion men
to aas kyun dilai thi?
pyaas kyun jagai thi?

chaltey chaltey wo bola
mosmon ki adat ha
waqt par badal jana
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Post by misha » Apr 07, 2011

wahhhhh abht acha....

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Post by dua » Apr 07, 2011

image n poetry both r nice

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Post by Cyra » Apr 08, 2011

Ap nay to sare wording change kar de.
Real ye hai,


Baarishon ke mausam main Waqt ke andheron main
Maine us se poocha tha Chorr to na jaoge

Haath tham ker us ne Kaan main yeh bola tha
Kaise chorr sakta hoon Tum to Jaan ho meri

Aur aaj aisa hai Waqt ki tamazat main
Wehshaton ke Mausam main Maine us se poocha hai

Chorr kar hi jaana tha Muskurati galiyon main
Aas kiyun dilayi thi Pyaas kyun jagayi thi

Mere in sawalon per Na woh chonka na woh thehra
Chalte chalte itna kaha Mausamon ke khel hain sab

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Post by sadeyez » Apr 09, 2011

thanks teto......

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Post by bebo » Apr 09, 2011

gud 1

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Post by Mudassir » Apr 25, 2011

good g

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