Unhe Aina Dikha Doon

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Tanhayiiii
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Unhe Aina Dikha Doon

Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 07, 2011 Views: 1385

Chiragh-e-shab ko jese aandhiya achi nhi lagti,
kuch ayse hi hum ko khush fehmiyaa achi nhi lagti..

jinhain sooney k pinjre me ghiza mil jaye chaandi ki,
unhain umar bhar phir aazadiyaan achi nhi lagti..

bulandi par pochaaye ga mera hunar mujhko,
mujhe kadmo k nechey seerhiyaa achi nhi lagti..

mera g chahta he unko aayenaa dikhaa du,
wo jin ko doossro ki khoobiyaa achi nhi lagti....!!


~ Suna ho ga kisi se dard ki ikk hadd bhi hoti hai
Milo hum se k hum uss hadd k aksar paar jatay hein ~

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Re: Unhe Aina Dikha Doon

Post by Faridi » Mar 07, 2011

Tanhayiiii wrote:Chiragh-e-shab ko jese aandhiya achi nhi lagti,
kuch ayse hi hum ko khush fehmiyaa achi nhi lagti..

jinhain sooney k pinjre me ghiza mil jaye chaandi ki,
unhain umar bhar phir aazadiyaan achi nhi lagti..

bulandi par pochaaye ga mera hunar mujhko,
mujhe kadmo k nechey seerhiyaa achi nhi lagti..

mera g chahta he unko aayenaa dikhaa du,
wo jin ko doossro ki khoobiyaa achi nhi lagti....!!
Superb tanhayiiii
aik aik line ki apni aik alag he baat hy
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Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 07, 2011

thanks sooo much faridi


~ Suna ho ga kisi se dard ki ikk hadd bhi hoti hai
Milo hum se k hum uss hadd k aksar paar jatay hein ~

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Post by Mudassir » Mar 07, 2011

keya baat hai nice dear.....

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Post by Cyra » Mar 07, 2011

Superb miss Tanahii..
mera g chahta he unko aayenaa dikhaa du,
wo jin ko doossro ki khoobiyaa achi nhi lagti....!!

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Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 08, 2011

thanks mudassir and teto


~ Suna ho ga kisi se dard ki ikk hadd bhi hoti hai
Milo hum se k hum uss hadd k aksar paar jatay hein ~

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Post by dua » Mar 08, 2011

Nice sharing

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Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 09, 2011

thank dua


~ Suna ho ga kisi se dard ki ikk hadd bhi hoti hai
Milo hum se k hum uss hadd k aksar paar jatay hein ~

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Post by bebo » Mar 09, 2011

gud 1

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Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 09, 2011

thanks


~ Suna ho ga kisi se dard ki ikk hadd bhi hoti hai
Milo hum se k hum uss hadd k aksar paar jatay hein ~

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