falak ke teer ka kya nishana tha

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falak ke teer ka kya nishana tha

Post by Faridi » Mar 03, 2011 Views: 5205

falak ke teer ka kya nishana tha,

udhar thi bijli idhar mera aashiyana tha,

pouch rahi thi kinare pe kashti-e-umeed,

usi waqt is tufaan ko bhi aana tha

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Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 03, 2011

very nice


~ Suna ho ga kisi se dard ki ikk hadd bhi hoti hai
Milo hum se k hum uss hadd k aksar paar jatay hein ~

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Post by Faridi » Mar 03, 2011

Tanhayiiii wrote:very nice
Shukaria :)

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Post by bebo » Mar 03, 2011

superb

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Post by Faridi » Mar 03, 2011

bebo wrote:superb
thanks

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Post by Cyra » Mar 03, 2011

nice

pouch rahi thi kinare pe kashti-e-umeed,

usi waqt is tufaan ko bhi aana tha

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Post by Faridi » Mar 03, 2011

teto wrote:nice

pouch rahi thi kinare pe kashti-e-umeed,

usi waqt is tufaan ko bhi aana tha
thanks teto :)

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Post by Mudassir » Mar 04, 2011

good yar cha gaya hai...

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Post by Faridi » Mar 04, 2011

mudassir wrote:good yar cha gaya hai...
thanks

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