AAO KUCH KHAB BUNEN

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kheyal
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AAO KUCH KHAB BUNEN

Post by kheyal » Sep 29, 2008 Views: 3057

Aao kuch khab bunen,
upne berung se chehray pe gulon ko mul den,
dil ki thith'ree huwi gulyun men
Faqut pul bher ko
A'haten gurm si sanson ki rakhen,
Gham-e- tunha'ee ka hum kuch to madawa ker len,
Aao kuch der sahee
Waq't ki qaid se azad rahen.

-KHEYAL

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Post by ar » Sep 29, 2008

Nice

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Post by shaka » Oct 01, 2008

nice poetry

keep going
Girls Don't disturb me, I'm already disturb enough.

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Post by kheyal » Oct 06, 2008

Thank you A.Rahman...
For your reply.

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Post by kheyal » Oct 06, 2008

Thank you shahka
for ur reply.

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Post by srabon » Oct 06, 2008

what language is that? I don't speak that language. You should translate it in english. so that the other people who speak different language, can share and say you thanks.

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Post by kheyal » Oct 14, 2008

THIS IS IN URDU/HINDI LANGUAGE.
THERE ARE SOME POSTS IN ENGLISH HERE.
PLS. GO THROUGH THEM.

THANKS FOR YOUR REPLY.

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