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shaam ke saanvale chehare ko....

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shaam ke saanvale chehare ko nikhaara jaaye
kyon na sagar se koi chaand ubaara jaaye

raas aayaa nahin taskin kaa saahil koi
phir mujhe pyaas ke dariyaa men utaaraa jaaye

meharabaaN terii nazar, teri adaayen qaatil
tujhako kis naam se ai dost pukaaraa jaye

mujhko Dar hai tere vaade pe bharosaa karake
muft mein ye dil-e-Khushafaham na maaraa jaaye

jisake dam se tere din-raat darakhshaan thay "Qateel"
kaise ab us ke binaa vaqt guzaaraa jaaye
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by Sawera » Jan 18, 2011

NICE

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Post by Cyra » Jan 18, 2011

wow

kaise ab us ke binaa vaqt guzaaraa jaaye

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Post by dua » Jan 19, 2011

very nice

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Post by arslan » Jan 19, 2011

achi ha..hansna mat,,,aik baat pochni ha..QATEEL poet ha?
"I haven't stop loving you,
it's just my heart has learned to live
without your love."

SUNNY

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Post by Faridi » Jan 19, 2011

arslan wrote:achi ha..hansna mat,,,aik baat pochni ha..QATEEL poet ha?
han bhai Qateel poet ka laqab hy

Nice poem

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Post by Cyra » Jan 19, 2011

arslan wrote:achi ha..hansna mat,,,aik baat pochni ha..QATEEL poet ha?
hahaha tm kia smjay??

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Post by being lonely » Jan 19, 2011

thank O frendz :)
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by being lonely » Jan 19, 2011

arslan wrote:achi ha..hansna mat,,,aik baat pochni ha..QATEEL poet ha?
ji Arslan........Qateel Shifai poet thay.....
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by being lonely » Jan 19, 2011

Faridi wrote:
arslan wrote:achi ha..hansna mat,,,aik baat pochni ha..QATEEL poet ha?
han bhai Qateel poet ka laqab hy

Nice poem
Qateel shifai ka laqab nhi "takhalus" hai ye Qateel...

n dis x Ghazal nt poem :)
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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