Mere Pehlu Mai Bhi Ek Shamma Jala Karti Hai

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Mere Pehlu Mai Bhi Ek Shamma Jala Karti Hai

Post by chandoo » Jun 16, 2009 Views: 1946

Mere Pehlu Mai Bhi Ek Shamma Jala Karti Hai,

Jis Ki Lou Se Teri Tasvir Bana Karti Hai,



Samne Terey Zuban Band Rehti Hai,

DiL Ki Jo Baat Hai Wo Aankh Adaa Karti Hai,

Chup Kiyon Ho ?

Hum Sey Koi Baat Karo,

Aisey Khamoshi Se Tu Takleef Barha Karti Hai,

Shama Jalti Hai Tu Zamany Ko Pata Chalta Hai,

DiL K Jalney Ki Khabar Kis Ko Howa Karti Hai

Mere Pehlu Main B Ek Shama Jala Karti Hai

Jis Ki Lou Se Teri Tasweer Bana Karti Hai…..!!

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Post by ujala » Jun 16, 2009

wawooooooo.....acha to ya kam bi ata ha p ko

nice poem chandoo

looks u was victim in old days

just kidding
nice poem

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Post by chandoo » Jun 16, 2009

ujala wrote:looks u was victim in old days
Mere Pehlu Mai Bhi Ek Shamma Jala Karti Hai,

not

Mere Pehlu Mai Bhi Ek Shamma Jala Karti Thi,

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Post by Pearl » Jun 16, 2009

beautiful

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Post by vicked.vicky » Aug 31, 2009

so romantic
Vicked Vicky

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Post by Cyra » Dec 25, 2010

very nice poem.

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Post by FARHANALI2010 » Dec 27, 2010

GOOD CHANDOO

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Post by Faridi » Dec 27, 2010

Chandoo or portry great yaar
nice poem chandoo

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