Naya sawera nai roshni....

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Naya sawera nai roshni....

Post by kuku » Jul 21, 2010 Views: 1910

Naya sawera nai roshni,Aasha ki kirno s bhari.
Utth Jaag kyo soya hai maanav,Dukh bhari ab raat dhali

Utth basa tu nai zindgi beeti baato ko bhoolkar
Andhiyare man m deep jala, dukh ki rato ko bhoolkar

Hanskar kadam aage badha, Rona pichhe chhodkar
Khushiyo ki bagiya saza,Gam k kaanto ko todkar

Aakash jhukega tere liye,Ek baar najar utha to sahi.
Sansar jhukega kadmo m, Do kadam aage badh to sahi..

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Post by chandoo » Jul 21, 2010

nice poetic start.

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Thanks dear!!!

Post by kuku » Jul 21, 2010

Thanks dear!!!

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Post by admin » Jul 21, 2010

OK i am wake up now :P

just kidding

nice sharing dear

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Post by kuku » Jul 21, 2010

Thanks... Admin!!

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Post by arslan » Jul 21, 2010

kia baat ha, ap bhi poet hain..chalain ji compitition chal paraa ha..between BEING LONELY, PEARL & KUKU..Well keep it up dear..nice starting..
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Post by Pearl » Jul 21, 2010

nice start

keep it up

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Post by alvera » Aug 25, 2010

poetry meri samaj say bhir hay per jab bhi being ki ya phir aj apki read ki achi lagi

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Post by being lonely » Aug 26, 2010

itx nyc........ :)
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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