BAITBAZI.....**~**Month MAY 2010**~**

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BAITBAZI.....**~**Month MAY 2010**~**

Post by being lonely » May 07, 2010 Views: 1010

"RULES of BAITBAZI"

1-shair should be genuine....not your own

2-always wirte last HARF of the shair (URDU harf)

3-dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair

4-do not write the whole ghazal/nazam,only one shair or ruba/qta'a


My shair:


"Nazar jab tumse milti hay mein khud ko bhool jata hoon
Bus ik dharkan dharakti hay mein khud ko bhool jata hoon"


"Noon"
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by ujala » May 07, 2010

NahiiN suntaa sitam_iijaad hamaari ya_rab
Tujh se har waqt hai fariyaad hamaarii ya_rab
Phir ko_ii maane na maane hameN parvah kyaa hai
Maan le gar dil-e-naashaad hamaarii ya_rab




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Post by being lonely » May 07, 2010

Barishon ka mausam hai,
Rooh ki fizaaon mein.
Ghamzada hawaaein hain,
Be-sabab udaasi hai


"Yeh"
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by ujala » May 08, 2010

Yeh duniya ghum tu deti hai shareek-e-ghum nahin hOti..
Kisi ke duur Rehne se Mohabbat kaM nahin Hoti..


YEH

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Post by max.wasim » May 09, 2010

Yeh na thi hamari qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota
Agar aur jeete rahte yahi intezaar hota
Tere waade pe jiye ham to yeh jaan jhoot jana
Ke kushi se mar na jaate agar aitbaar hota


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Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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Post by being lonely » May 09, 2010

ab aur kya kisi se marasim burhaein hum
yeh bhi bohut hai, tujhe bhool ja’ein hum


"Meem"
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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