Mein ne aghaz se anjam-e-safar jana hai..........

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Mein ne aghaz se anjam-e-safar jana hai..........

Post by being lonely » Feb 23, 2010 Views: 4484

Mein ne aghaz se anjam-e-safar jana hai
Sab ko do chaar qadam chal k theher jana hai

Gham vo sehra-e-tammana k bagole ki tarah
jis ko manzil na mili us ko bikhar jana hai

Teri nazroon mein meray dard ki qeemat kya thee
Mere daman ne tu ansoo ko guhur jana hai

Ab k bichre tu na pehchan sakain ge chehre
meri chahat tere pinda ko mar jana hai

Jane wale ko na roko k bharam reh jaye
Tum pukaro bhi tu kab us ko theher jana hai

Tez soraj mein chale atay hain meri janib
doston ne mujhe sehra ka shajar jana hai

Zindagi ko bhi tere dar se bhikari ki tarah
Aik pal k liye rukna hai guzar jana hai

Apni afsurda mizaji ka bura ho k Faraz
Waqeya koi bhi ho ankh ko bhar jana hai
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by ujala » Feb 24, 2010

Tez soraj mein chale atay hain meri janib
doston ne mujhe sehra ka shajar jana hai



very nice lines

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Post by max.wasim » Feb 24, 2010

Jane wale ko na roko k bharam reh jaye
Tum pukaro bhi tu kab us ko theher jana hai
So true
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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Post by arslan » Feb 24, 2010

meri nazar same MAX.Waseem walay sher pe pari ha..

Jane wale ko na roko k bharam reh jaye
Tum pukaro bhi tu kab us ko theher jana hai

lakin baqol BEING LONELY ne kaha ha k in k peechay aik matlab nahin hota..

is ne kaha mat roko usay os ne rukna ha to nahin..

per is ka ye matlab bhi nikalta ha k shayad wo yahi os k monh se sun-na chahta ha..keh
BAS AIK BAAR YE MUJHAY KHUD ROK LE..
"I haven't stop loving you,
it's just my heart has learned to live
without your love."

SUNNY

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Post by being lonely » Feb 24, 2010

ujala wrote:Tez soraj mein chale atay hain meri janib
doston ne mujhe sehra ka shajar jana hai



very nice lines
thanks alot ujala
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by being lonely » Feb 24, 2010

max.wasim wrote:Jane wale ko na roko k bharam reh jaye
Tum pukaro bhi tu kab us ko theher jana hai
So true
hmmmm
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by being lonely » Feb 24, 2010

arslan wrote:meri nazar same MAX.Waseem walay sher pe pari ha..

Jane wale ko na roko k bharam reh jaye
Tum pukaro bhi tu kab us ko theher jana hai

lakin baqol BEING LONELY ne kaha ha k in k peechay aik matlab nahin hota..

is ne kaha mat roko usay os ne rukna ha to nahin..

per is ka ye matlab bhi nikalta ha k shayad wo yahi os k monh se sun-na chahta ha..keh
BAS AIK BAAR YE MUJHAY KHUD ROK LE..
hmmmmm........agreeee......thanx alot janab........itna ghor krnay ka.......n itna detailed comment krnay ka...........
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by Anshal » Feb 25, 2010

nice one.

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Post by being lonely » Feb 25, 2010

thanxx anshal
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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