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Post by being lonely » Apr 08, 2010 Views: 1449

James.Striker wrote:nice one.
thanx..
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Post by being lonely » Apr 08, 2010

Pearl wrote:hmm nice
thanx alot pearl..
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Post by being lonely » Apr 08, 2010

Umer Farooq wrote:uper sa guzar gae
itni mushkil nhi thi yeh tu :( .....phr bhi thanx for comment janab
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Post by being lonely » Apr 08, 2010

max.wasim wrote:
jurm hai gar wafa to kia, kyuN maiN wafa ko chor dooN
kehtey haiN is gunah ki hotee koi sazaa nahi
Sazaa to bahut bhari hoti hai, ye aur baat hai us sazaa men bhi mazaa hota hai.
Beautiful line
thanx for ur detailed comment wasim..
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Post by waqassial » Apr 09, 2010

Dear Being lonely...............you have been residing in our hearts since day one you joined the forum....................your collection is really superb, awesome and really touchy...........appreciated sense of poetry dear Friend!

Keep it up!

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Post by being lonely » Apr 09, 2010

waqassial wrote:Dear Being lonely...............you have been residing in our hearts since day one you joined the forum....................your collection is really superb, awesome and really touchy...........appreciated sense of poetry dear Friend!

Keep it up!

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buhat buhat shukria waqassial......... :) :) :) :) :) :)
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Post by Pearl » Apr 09, 2010

Umer Farooq wrote:uper sa guzar gae
Phir pariay perte rahi niche bhi ajay ga
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Post by Pearl » Apr 09, 2010

max.wasim wrote:
jurm hai gar wafa to kia, kyuN maiN wafa ko chor dooN
kehtey haiN is gunah ki hotee koi sazaa nahi
Sazaa to bahut bhari hoti hai, ye aur baat hai us sazaa men bhi mazaa hota hai.
Beautiful line
very well set wasim
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