Jo chal sako tu aisi koi chaal chal jana

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Jo chal sako tu aisi koi chaal chal jana

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Jo chal sako tu aisi koi chaal chal jana
mujhey guman bhi na ho or tum badal jana

ye shulge ho badan ki tu kia kiya jaye
so lazmi tha tery perhan ka jal jana

tumhe karo koi darma' ye waqat aa pohncha
key ab chara garon ko bhi haath mal jana

abhi abhi tu judai ki shaam aai thi
humain ajeeb laga zindagi ka dhal jana

saji sajai muat zindagi tu nahi
murkhon ney maqabar ko bhi mehal jana

ye kia key tu bhi isi saet e zawal main hai
key jis tarha hai sabhi sorjon ko dhal jana

har aik ishq key bad or us k ishq key bad
FARAZ itna bhi aasan na tha sanbhal jana

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Post by chandoo » Apr 07, 2010

khuli ijaazat, soch lo chaal chal di to ro na parna...!

just kidding this poetry shows loyalty and confident love

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Post by laiq.shahid » Apr 07, 2010

wha je kia bat

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Post by bebo » Apr 07, 2010

Jo chal sako tu aisi koi chaal chal jana
mujhey guman bhi na ho or tum badal jana

aisa ho to baat hi kia hay ji

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Post by ujala » Apr 07, 2010

bitter reality ha ji

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Post by Pearl » Apr 07, 2010

bebo wrote:Jo chal sako tu aisi koi chaal chal jana
mujhey guman bhi na ho or tum badal jana

aisa ho to baat hi kia hay ji
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Post by Pearl » Apr 07, 2010

laiq.shahid wrote:wha je kia bat
Shukria shukria

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Post by Pearl » Apr 07, 2010

chandoo wrote:khuli ijaazat, soch lo chaal chal di to ro na parna...!

just kidding this poetry shows loyalty and confident love
Aray sir jab pahle nahi socha to ab kia sochna :)

Thanks for your comments

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Post by Pearl » Apr 07, 2010

ujala wrote:bitter reality ha ji
Thanks for comments

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Post by James.Striker » Apr 07, 2010

Chandoo bhai hath hola rakhna.

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