kabhi ashk bun ke hunsa keroon.....

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kabhi ashk bun ke hunsa keroon.....

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Hai duaa aisee ada` bano`N, rukh-e-yaar per hee raha karoon
Kabhii phool bun ke khila karoon, kabhi ashk bun ke hunsa keroon

Merii arzoo hai faQt yehii, tera geet bun ke raha keroon
Tere dil se niklo`N agr kabhi, tu tere labo`N pe saja keroon

Mera ye wajood ho kam se kam, kaheen rait per kissi naQsh sa
Tu banaay tu mae bana keroon, tu mitaaye tu mae mitta keroon


Kabhii surd aaho`N ka haar hoon, kabhi anso`on ki Qataar hoon
Mae hur ik durd ka pyaar hoon, ghum-e-yaar tujh se gila keroon

Mae tamaan yaad ke motiyo`N ko rakhay hoon ankho`N ki Qaid mien
Tera hukm mujh ko milay agr tu mae Qaidiyon ko riha keroon
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by max.wasim » Feb 26, 2010

Mae tamaan yaad ke motiyo`N ko rakhay hoon ankho`N ki Qaid mien
Tera hukm mujh ko milay agr tu mae Qaidiyon ko riha keroon.
Too gud yaar, very touching
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
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Post by ujala » Feb 26, 2010

aray wah ...so beautiful

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Post by Anshal » Feb 26, 2010

SO NICE LINES.

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Post by Amir-07 » Feb 26, 2010

hmmmmmmmm....great dear..

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Post by arslan » Feb 27, 2010

Mera ye wajood ho kam se kam, kaheen rait per kissi naQsh sa
Tu banaay tu mae bana keroon, tu mitaaye tu mae mitta keroon.

oye hoye janab Something is behind this hmm.
also sumthing is black in the yellw..hehehehe..
nice potery dear..particular these line which u have bold or focus, what ever u call..
"I haven't stop loving you,
it's just my heart has learned to live
without your love."

SUNNY

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Post by being lonely » Feb 27, 2010

max.wasim,ujala,anshal,amir-07..........thanx alot
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by being lonely » Feb 27, 2010

arslan wrote:Mera ye wajood ho kam se kam, kaheen rait per kissi naQsh sa
Tu banaay tu mae bana keroon, tu mitaaye tu mae mitta keroon.

oye hoye janab Something is behind this hmm.
also sumthing is black in the yellw..hehehehe..
nice potery dear..particular these line which u have bold or focus, what ever u call..
"oye hoye janab Something is behind this hmm".....?????
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pasnd krnay ka shukria....
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by bebo » Feb 27, 2010

Mera ye wajood ho kam se kam, kaheen rait per kissi naQsh sa
Tu banaay tu mae bana keroon, tu mitaaye tu mae mitta keroon

ya waqi tiuchy lines hen

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