Mere Awaz (12 May)

Post by ar » May 12, 2009 Views: 957

Is imtehaan main hoon,dil ka baab kis ko doon
Nisaab-e-ishq pe likhi kitaab kis ko doon

Har ek shakhs ko mujh se bohat mohabbat hai
Sawal yeh hai wafa ka jawab kis ko doon

Mera khuloos,mohabbat,wafa hai sab ke liye
Sochta hon ke lab-e-lubaab kis ko doon

Mere liye to sabhi log ek jese hain
Sukoon kis ko don,main izteraab kis ko doon

Hujoom-e-husun ke melay main sochta hoon main
Ke apne hath main thama gulaab kis ko doon
_ar

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I Need your Help, in order to improve.
Please Correct me where ever I'm wrong :

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Post by **RituRaj** » May 12, 2009

Very Beautiful Words...No need for Corrections....

Post by **Love or Hate me** » May 12, 2009

Good Ar Very Lovely and Touching Lines as Rituraj said no need for correction.

One thing i want to tell

JAB HUM KHUCH BHI DIL SE LIKHTE HANI PADTE HAIN TO VO HAMESHA HE ACHA OR TOUCHING HOTA HAI....

Post by **RituRaj** » May 12, 2009

Kya Baat hai Love...Tum bhi Shayar ho gaye.....
Lekin kya Sahi Baat ki hai Dost......