Talow honay wali naye saal ki subah kesi ho gi...!!!

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Talow honay wali naye saal ki subah kesi ho gi...!!!

Post by being lonely » Dec 30, 2010 Views: 1426

ایک ایسی گہری رات کے بعد ۔۔۔
طلوع ہونے والی نئے سال کی صبج کیسی ہوگی،
جب آگہی جرم بن چکی ہے
جب الفت و محبت میں ڈوبے ہوئے لمحے
وقت کی ٹوٹی ہوئی کرچیوں میں خون آلود پڑے ہیں،
اور وقت کی بے وفائی ،
بے دام ہو چکی ہے
اور آدمی اپنے انسان ہونے کے احساس سے محروم ہے
جب ایک کلی پھول بننے کی عمر کو نہیں چھو سکتی
۔۔۔۔۔جب ایک خیال
خوشبو کی لہر نہ بن سکے گا۔
تو آنے والے سال کا نیا دن
بسنت کے رنگ کیونکر بانٹھے گا۔
آج محبت جرم بن چکی ہے اور ۔۔۔۔
ایک بار پھر
کچا گھڑا ، محبت کے شو ر مچاتے
دریا کی لہروں میں گم ہوتا جارہا ہے
کوئی ہے،
جو مبحت کی اس دعا کوسمیٹے لے ۔
اور انسان کے پتھر نما چہرے پر
روشنی بکھر دے ۔
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by Mudassir » Dec 30, 2010

wah keya baat hai.....

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Post by Cyra » Dec 31, 2010

such mai being aj muhbt jurm bn chuke hai, koe nahe jo mhbt ke dua ko smat lay...

pata nahe kaise ho ge nay sal ke pehle subh......

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Post by Faridi » Dec 31, 2010

teto wrote:such mai being aj muhbt jurm bn chuke hai, koe nahe jo mhbt ke dua ko smat lay...

pata nahe kaise ho ge nay sal ke pehle subh......
INSHALLAH acha ho ga kabhi ALLAH ki zaat sa naumeed maat hoya karooo

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Post by max.wasim » Jan 01, 2011

۔۔۔۔۔جب ایک خیال
خوشبو کی لہر نہ بن سکے گا۔
تو آنے والے سال کا نیا دن
بسنت کے رنگ کیونکر بانٹھے گا

Jawab nahi is line ka, so good
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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honey wali nahi shaam

Post by maahi » Jan 02, 2011

teto wrote:such mai being aj muhbt jurm bn chuke hai, koe nahe jo mhbt ke dua ko smat lay...

pata nahe kaise ho ge nay sal ke pehle subh......
Teto! if you care for your forum friends
please change your avatar picture immediately.

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Re: honey wali nahi shaam

Post by max.wasim » Jan 02, 2011

maahi wrote:
teto wrote:such mai being aj muhbt jurm bn chuke hai, koe nahe jo mhbt ke dua ko smat lay...

pata nahe kaise ho ge nay sal ke pehle subh......
Teto! if you care for your forum friends
please change your avatar picture immediately.
Whats wrong with her Avatar :?: :?:
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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Re: honey wali nahi shaam

Post by maahi » Jan 02, 2011

max.wasim wrote:
maahi wrote:
teto wrote:such mai being aj muhbt jurm bn chuke hai, koe nahe jo mhbt ke dua ko smat lay...

pata nahe kaise ho ge nay sal ke pehle subh......
Teto! if you care for your forum friends
please change your avatar picture immediately.
Whats wrong with her Avatar :?: :?:
Nothing's wrong with it.
Teto is a happy bubbly person.
Her avatar is positively depressing.
By the way, did you recommend it?

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Post by Aleena » Jan 02, 2011

ache to hai...

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Post by max.wasim » Jan 02, 2011

Yes of course,there is no problem with that.
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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