Silsale Toor Gia Wo Sabhi Jate Jate

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Silsale Toor Gia Wo Sabhi Jate Jate

Post by Pearl » Nov 21, 2009 Views: 726

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سلسلے توڑ گیا وو سبھی جاتے جاتے
ورنہ اتنے تو مراسم تھے کہ آتے جاتے

شکوہ ظلمت شب سے تو کہیں بہتر تھا
اپنے حصے کی کوئی شمع جلاتے جاتے

جشن مقتل ہی نہ برپا ہوا ورنہ ہم بھی
پابچولاں ہی سہی، ناچتے گاتے جاتے

کتنا آسان تھا تیرے ہجر میں مرنا جاناں
پھر بھی اک عمر لگی جان سے جاتے جاتے

اسکی وو جانے اُسے پسس وفا تھا کہ نہ تھا
تم فراز اپنی طرف سے تو نباتے جاتے

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Post by ujala » Nov 21, 2009

impressive

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Post by kajnh » Nov 23, 2009

Silsilay toor gaya ,, kya kehnay hai ji ! Poetry Queen :)
kajnh - the DON

Touching Your Heart!

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Post by Pearl » Nov 23, 2009

ujala wrote:impressive
thanks for comments

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Post by Pearl » Nov 23, 2009

kajnh wrote:Silsilay toor gaya ,, kya kehnay hai ji ! Poetry Queen :)
shukria janab bas aap ki zara nawazi hai

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Post by Anshal » Nov 24, 2009

realy nice ghazal by faraz

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Post by Pearl » Nov 26, 2009

Anshal wrote:realy nice ghazal by faraz
thanks dear

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