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Post by kheyal » Jun 03, 2009 Views: 980

FOR ALL THE FRIENDS....WHO LOVE POETRY.




-KHEYAL
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Post by Lavender girl » Jun 04, 2009

"Who permitted u to drop all dreams.....
Who permitted u to scrach al memories....."

Whatta splendid weaving dear......
Very strong imaginery in each & every poems dear......
And about flow of words its just marvellous & breath taking....


"But behold,
u r permitted anyhow to plunder me
to write a new history of love...."

I must say ur thoughts r great dear....... :)
can feel from ur wordz........
Keep inking such wonderful verses....
Love to read more.....

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Post by kheyal » Jun 07, 2009

Lavender girl wrote:"Who permitted u to drop all dreams.....


I must say ur thoughts r great dear....... :)
can feel from ur wordz........
Keep inking such wonderful verses....
Love to read more.....

THANKS A LOT LG...
I'M GRATEFUL WITH YOUR PRECIOUS WORDS....
READ AND ENJOY THE FEEL DEAR.

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Post by Pearl » Jun 15, 2009

its beautiful

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Post by kheyal » Jun 17, 2009

Pearl wrote:its beautiful
THANKS PEARL FOR LIKING IT...

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