JEENE KI DUVAA DI JAAEY. . . . .

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JEENE KI DUVAA DI JAAEY. . . . .

Post by Anshal » Mar 06, 2010 Views: 912


Mere ehsaas-e-junoon ko havaa di jaae,

Mujh ko neend aaey to zanjeer hilaa di jaaey. . . .



Sub ke gher jalne kuch to mujhe ghum ho mehsoos,

Mere gher ko bhi zara aag lagaa di jaaey. . . .



Mere munsif ne ye tae ker hi liyaa hai shaayad,

Jurm koi bhi kare mujh ko sazaa di jaaey. . . .



Woh hai perdon main to taskeen nazar ki khaatir,

Mujh ko uski koi tasveer dikhaa di jaaey. . . .



Mujh ko mernaa thaa so main mer hi rahaa hoon Mohsin,

Mere qaatil ko to jeene ki duvaa di jaaey. . . .

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Post by bebo » Mar 06, 2010

wah ji anshal superb ..........touching

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Post by ujala » Mar 06, 2010

lovely lines

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Post by max.wasim » Mar 07, 2010

Too gud.
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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Post by sharoz khan » Mar 07, 2010

good 8)

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Post by Anshal » Mar 10, 2010

bebo wrote:wah ji anshal superb ..........touching
Thanx bebo dear for ur lovely coments.

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Post by Anshal » Mar 10, 2010

ujala wrote:lovely lines
Thnx ujaala dear.

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Post by Anshal » Mar 10, 2010

max.wasim wrote:Too gud.
thnx too.

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Post by Anshal » Mar 10, 2010

armaan khan wrote:good 8)
thnx.

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