jal chukey khawab

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jal chukey khawab

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jal chukey khawab

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jal chukey khawab to phr aag bujhany aaya

ek naye dhang sy wo mujh ko jalany aaya

moom k pull sy guzar kr mujhy jana tha wahan

or soraj hi mera sath nibhany aaya

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Post by bebo » Mar 03, 2011

oyyyyy hoyyyyyyyy

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Post by Faridi » Mar 03, 2011

bebo wrote:oyyyyy hoyyyyyyyy
thx :)

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Post by Mudassir » Mar 04, 2011

wah keya baat hai faridi

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Post by Faridi » Mar 04, 2011

mudassir wrote:wah keya baat hai faridi
thanks dud :)

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Post by Cyra » Mar 04, 2011

See this...


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Post by Faridi » Mar 05, 2011

teto wrote:See this...

thnaks tetoo

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Post by Cyra » Mar 05, 2011

Mara zayda acha hai na???

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Post by Faridi » Mar 05, 2011

teto wrote:Mara zayda acha hai na???
han per poetry to mari hy na :wink:

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Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 05, 2011

very nice faridi and teto


~ Suna ho ga kisi se dard ki ikk hadd bhi hoti hai
Milo hum se k hum uss hadd k aksar paar jatay hein ~

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