Dil Ko Manana aggar Hota Aaasaaan......

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Dil Ko Manana aggar Hota Aaasaaan......

Post by Rhythm_Divine » Mar 12, 2011 Views: 990

Arz Kiya Hai......

Dil Ko Manana aggar Hota Aaasaaan......
Na Karti Kisi Ko Yoon Itna Pareshaan.......

Tanha Na Rehti Bhari Mehfil Mein Main.....
Na Hote Woh Halat Jo Ho Na Bayaan.......
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Post by Faridi » Mar 12, 2011

well try
keep it up
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Post by Cyra » Mar 13, 2011

wow nice try sis..
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Post by arslan » Mar 13, 2011

oo wo rhythm good job dude
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Post by Rhythm_Divine » Mar 13, 2011

Try? Haha ... Thanx, buddies !
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Post by admin » Mar 13, 2011

nice one :)
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Post by dua » Mar 14, 2011

nice attempt
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Post by Rhythm_Divine » Mar 14, 2011

Thanx , Admin & Dua ..
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Post by Tanhayiiii » Mar 15, 2011

really nice


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