Dehleez pe bikhray........

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Dehleez pe bikhray........

Post by being lonely » May 28, 2011 Views: 1844



Dehleez pe bikhray be-chehra pat'toon ki surat

Hum ko saath leye phirti hai tere dheyaan ki taiz hawa ...
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by Mudassir » May 28, 2011

hay hay zalim mar dala ...nice

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Post by dua » May 28, 2011

very beautiful lines,perfect match with background ,color scheme is absolute match with feeling,thanks being for this brilliant work

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Post by being lonely » May 28, 2011

thanx mudassir..
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by being lonely » May 28, 2011

nd dua ji..... ur comments alwayx encourage me.... to do bettr work
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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