"BAITBAZII" Month of April 2010...

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"BAITBAZII" Month of April 2010...

Post by being lonely » Apr 01, 2010 Views: 3471

"RULES of BAITBAZI"

1-shair should be genuine....not your own

2-always wirte last HARF of the shair (URDU harf)

3-dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair

4-do not write the whole ghazal/nazam,only one shair or ruba/qta'a


My shair:

"Ehsas na kar in jazboon ka, Nazroon se gira de beshak lekin..,.
Jeena bhi mujhay dushwar lagay, Itna to nazar andaz na kar.. "


"Ree"
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by arslan » Apr 01, 2010

Rait par likh ke meraa naam miTaayaa na karo
aaNkhen sach bolatii hain pyaar chupaayaa na karo


"Wow"
"I haven't stop loving you,
it's just my heart has learned to live
without your love."

SUNNY

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Post by Pearl » Apr 01, 2010


Wo us ka aaks-e-badan tha ke chandni ka kanwal
Wo nili jeel thi yan asaman ka tukra tha


Alif

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Post by max.wasim » Apr 02, 2010

Apni ruswai tere nam ka charcha dekhun
Ek zara sher kahun aur main kya kya dekhun


Noon
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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Post by ujala » Apr 02, 2010

wah ji wah yaha to "Mushaira" start ho raha ha

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Post by being lonely » Apr 03, 2010

partcipate kijiay na janab....
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by Pearl » Apr 03, 2010


Na koi gham khazan ka hai, na kuwahish hai baharoon ki
Humare sath hai Amjad kisi ki yaad ka mosam


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Post by max.wasim » Apr 03, 2010

Muhabbat main kare kya kuch kisi se ho nahin sakta
Mera marna bhi to meri khushi se ho nahin sakta


ALIF
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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Post by Pearl » Apr 03, 2010


Ashk-e-rawn ki nehar hai aur hum hain doston
Us be-wafa ka sheehar hai aur hu hain doston

Ye Ajnabhi si manzilain aur raftagan ki yaad
Tanhaion ka zehar hai aur hum hain doston


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Post by max.wasim » Apr 03, 2010

Nahin minnat-kash-e-tab-e-shanidan dastan meri
Khamoshi guftagu hai, bezubani hai zaban meri

Ye dastur-e-zaban-bandi hai kaisi teri mahfil mein
Yahan to bat karne ko tarasti hai zaban meri


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