BAITBAZI.....**~**Month July 2010**~**

[being lonely]

"RULES of BAITBAZI"

1-shair should be genuine....not your own

2-always wirte last HARF of the shair (URDU harf)

3-dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair

4-do not write the whole ghazal/nazam,only one shair or ruba/qta'a

My shair:

"Uski Bewfai par bhi fida hoti hai jaaan apni faraz
Khuda janay agar us main wafaa hoti tu kya hota"

"Alif"

[arslan]

Ab aksar chup-chup se rahe hain yoon hi kabhoo lab khole hain
Pahalay Firaq ko dekhaa hota ab to bahut kam bole hain


"NOON"

[Wasim]

[being lonely]

mr wasin......dnt do dis in this thread undrstand..........nhi participate krna tu mt kro but dun break de chain ok???????

[being lonely]

Na khaif hon mein nashtar se na mein kaanton se darta hoon
Kissi ka dil dukha dein jo mein un lafzon se darta hoon

"Noon"

[mir55]

na tha kutch tu khuda tha,kutch na huta to khuda huta
douboia mujh ko honey nien ,na huta mien tu kia huta.
Alf

[arslan]

Aab yeah sochoon tu bhanwar zehan mein par jaatay hain
Kaisay chehray hain jo miltay hee bichar jaatay hain


"NOON"

[being lonely]

"Nahi masroof may itna k wahan ka rasta bhuloon
Koi jab muntazir hi na ho to jana acha nahi lagta...."


"Alif"