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***~***Apko bhool jain hum***~***

Post by being lonely » Apr 07, 2010 Views: 1437

Apko bhool jain hum, itney to bai wafa nahi
app se kia gila karaiN, app se kuch gila nahi


sheesha-e-dil ko torna unka to ek khail hai
hum se he bhool ho gai, unki koi KhaTa nahi


Kash woh apney ghuma mujhey day dain to kuch sukoon miley
woh kitna bad naseeb hai, ghum bhi jisey mila nahi


jurm hai gar wafa to kia, kyuN maiN wafa ko chor dooN
kehtey haiN is gunah ki hotee koi sazaa nahi
Last edited by being lonely on Apr 14, 2010, edited 1 time in total.
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by ujala » Apr 07, 2010

so niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Post by chandoo » Apr 07, 2010

:roll: sorry to being lonely, bebo pear and all the other members who posts poetry. coz I've no sense of poetry.

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Post by James.Striker » Apr 07, 2010

nice one.

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Post by Pearl » Apr 07, 2010

hmm nice

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Post by Pearl » Apr 07, 2010

chandoo wrote::roll: sorry to being lonely, bebo pear and all the other members who posts poetry. coz I've no sense of poetry.
KOI bat nahi sir perte rahiay smajh main bhi ane lage gi

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Post by Umer Farooq » Apr 08, 2010

uper sa guzar gae

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Post by max.wasim » Apr 08, 2010

jurm hai gar wafa to kia, kyuN maiN wafa ko chor dooN
kehtey haiN is gunah ki hotee koi sazaa nahi
Sazaa to bahut bhari hoti hai, ye aur baat hai us sazaa men bhi mazaa hota hai.
Beautiful line
♥ Don't try to be different ,, just be good...
Bcoz now a days just being good is different enough ♥




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Post by being lonely » Apr 08, 2010

ujala wrote:so niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee
thanx alot.. :)
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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Post by being lonely » Apr 08, 2010

chandoo wrote::roll: sorry to being lonely, bebo pear and all the other members who posts poetry. coz I've no sense of poetry.
sense ki kia bat hai chadoo mera khyal hr bashaoor insan thorha sa ghor kray tu smajh ly.....bs thorhi dair ky liay concentrate krna hota hai.....agr dil ko achi lgay jo bat wahan kahi gai hai tu zahar hai achi shairi hai WESAY tu hr aik ki apni choice hoti na.....BDW thanxx alot for comment
Mai ap apni moat ki tyaarion mai hon..!!!
Meray khilaaf apki Saazish fazool hai..!!!

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